Tuesday, December 16, 2008

And Then There Were Five

Last week my friend Sam shared the goings-on of his recent winter jog and asked me to write a haiku about it. So far, I have five versions. Do you have a favorite?

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December jog
railroad crossing
eleven turkey vultures

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11 turkey vultures
1 deer
death = dinner

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1 deer's fall
is
11 turkey vultures' ball

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December dinner --
Eleven turkey vultures
dine on deer.

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fresh venison
feast for
feisty vultures

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